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Hey MoonlightAssassin, I really like the over all narrative in this chapter. I like that you insinuate with out directly telling us that Hotaru is gay, it makes it more ...

Hey Ice, This was really nice. I have a few questions and little bits I'm going to pick out but only to understand better. I know that these things are ...

This was a pleasure to read. I didn't care about the intended context because I created my own. I could pick at it and find tiny little things that you ...

Hey Night, This was an interesting read. I find my self agreeing with Seemingly in the sense that I couldn't really find a story or anything like that within this ...

So, when I read, "This is an acrostic poem" I kind of went to hit the return button. After actually looking at it though, I was Amazed (I wish I ...

Hey Nightshade, This was amazing. I understood what you meant about the tearing down of the blinds as i read the rest of the stanza but ti is slightly ambiguous. ...

Hey, I disagree with Lindsey. I liked the mess and I understand where you're coming from when you talk about not writing in a traditional manner. I also find that ...

Hey, Good to hear from you. The Structure of this piece is very different. It definitely suits the title as it simply is food for thought. I guess I'll just ...

Hey Jag, Awesome story! I like how there was this sense of discomfort for the reader throughout the whole thing, as if you knew something wasn't right with the shadows ...

Hey Snick, I really liked this. There's so much passion and pain which makes it so awesome! There are a few little things that big me but it's just me ...

Hey StreetRat, First I would like to say Good Job! It's a very interesting poem. It does need some work as the others have said but I'm going to give ...

I realise this is an old post but I was intrigued when reading the replies. My first interpretation was that it was purely about the nature of conformity. In my ...

Wow. Harsh crit. much guys? Chill. Just to reflect on what the others have said, i disagree with lilymoore about the jerkiness of those lines. I like what LRA said ...

I really liked this! :) Possibly the one criticism I have is that I found the rhythm in the first lines of the first two stanzas was hard to feel, ...

I kind of agree with eyesxsewnxopen. I see the pain and the rejection and how the narrator is trying to pass through life. I also agree with what she is ...