Beatrice

Uhmm, the description is quite well. Yeah a few misplaced words but i'ld rather take it as your way of writing. I also liked the theme, it was quite out ...

Hey, hmm the grammar part! Ehh, excluding that, it's very true to the theme. And the theme is not just catchy , but eye opening too. And coming to the ...

Hey there, it's sober , simple and neatly written. In a few paras you have sketched and introduced a character (without a name though) as well as told a story. ...

Sure Biluata, however i'll start posting by the end of next month. :-)

Hey, wohow, the poem is really awesome. It has been really chaotic and messy like you have stated the most beautifull love poem should be. The poem has covered all ...