Baywolf

I remember when my mom ran over my hunting dog. It was horrible, I think I cried for weeks. Trooper had survived snake bite, constipation (he ate too many rats, ...

I really want to cry right now. I feel so bad about Jacob... I remember reviewing your first chapter, so when I saw this I had to see where you ...

Howdy TheMadHatter! Let's get straight to the good stuff eh? Grammar: There were a few nitpicks in this area, and I will list and highlight them in red for you ...

Hey kitrosemon13, To start off, I like to mention my general impression of the work. It was good. I liked the overall themes--love, angst, running to the one you love--and ...

Hey Reise! I just thought I'd tell you that I LOVE angel stories. Especially when they take a new spin on the already heavily explored concept of angels, demons, and ...

This is very beautiful and sad. It's easy to write of despair and giving up, but it's another story altogether to write of such things in a way that doesn't ...

Hey kr1117! I haven't read any more of your book thus far, but I have to say it's good. I also have to say *laugh* that I too have a ...

Well, this is certainly *ahem* different. To get on with the review! At some point, I wondered if you were going for some sort of alternating rhyming scheme, but at ...

That was terrific. Enough said. Except I feel like I need to say something else to give you a *really* good review. Because, quite frankly, this story deserves as much. ...

Writing about one of the saddest times in history...hmm. I liked it. Sorry if my comments don't make much sense. I tend to ramble, whether writing or speaking. I was ...

Howdy Shepherd! I'm not a big fan of writing reviews where all I do is nitpick, and luckily, I didn't find anything I felt had to be picked at! Yay! ...

Hey Bree! Disturbed made a good point. For me, it seemed an almost tedious read where I was lost in the descriptions, which really takes away from the story itself. ...

*Sigh* this poem just about sums up my youth (okay, I understand I"m not old, but really, I feel like it) Anyway, there's something about your style...I can't quite put ...

Hey Hibiscus! Well, the style was definitely understated, with zero uses of capitalization and small blocks of prose composed of tiny lines. I liked it. It was simple, elegant, and ...

This was really improved! Wow! I like how you cleaned it up, and made it seem more like a book than an exposition on her feelings. :) Plus, I have ...