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Hi Lumi, That was awesome! I loved it! And I'm not a fan of poetry, but I think it was good. But I have to say, there were a couple ...

hi lotus, I must say ... that's ... quite a disturbing piece you've written. But I really do love it. I love the descriptions, and how you've captured the emotions. ...

hey lakegirls, Ok, so when I first started reading the story, I was a little confused as to where it was all taking place, but then I got to the ...

Hey GreenLight24, That was amazing! Like emjayc said, it takes a lot of guts to say that! And I love it! I love how you've captured your feelings, and it ...

To Ivion, Wow!! I like it! I love how you've portrayed Lisa. She seems small and innocent, but very intelligent. The only problem is (And I blame my curiosity for ...

I love this! It is written beautifully, and got me engaged quickly! Though there were a few times when I got confused ... like whether the character was female or ...

I love it! It is very beautiful! But I must admit I was confused as to where the setting is ...sort of. And the whole story seems a little vague ...

To LeeOz, This is ... an amazing piece of text (I know, poor choice of words but ... I don't know how else to put it, because "story" doesn't quite ...

It's very good! I like the formality of it, and how you capture the character's 'voice' in the paragraph. I'd love to hear more of it too! Just a few ...