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BarrettBenedict

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The One Who Has Hope

    I would tear this apart if I had even cared enough to read it. Brutal enough for you? Good, because I'm joking, I read it. It' not my bag of ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inevitable Dread

    I'm sorry but I must comment on this again, as it provides an excellent example of the kinds of literal interpretations that are best left to ferment inside the sallow ...

    Dec 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Own Personal Haiku

    Well I wish you the best of luck in figuring out how to write haiku. I know it is hard, when you have the round eyes, but keep trying at ...

    Dec 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A full year

    Wow, that gets me right in the buffalo. This impresses on me a loss long pondered, and even after reading it a few times I'm not sure exactly what it ...

    Nov 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ergo Sum's Sun

    Excellent words old bean. This reminds me of a blind monk clawing at phantoms in the night, hoarse with the passion of a lifetime of unheeded words. Or something to ...

    Nov 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Indifference

    Crazybob, does not the pedantry of the reviews on this website shave on your nerves with a pair of rusty scissors? Perhaps it doesn't, but what I am getting at ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Two Holes and a Heavier Chest

    This had some serious crunch. I really have nothing to say except that I really enjoyed this, and I wish more people could express this sort of thing freely without ...

    Nov 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Poem About Hatred

    Ah, but isn't hatred more like a sword? One that you impale yourself upon and swing violently at phantasms of foes? Either way, the end result is self harm, and ...

    Nov 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ye ol' Critics

    You are a terrible writer and I hate your face, despite the fact that you seem to be after my own heart in this particular piece. Either way, this could ...

    Nov 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haikus

    I liked all of them a lot, the ant one less so even though there's really nothing to dislike about it. I would also have to say that the "Magic, ...

    Nov 26, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Halo 3

    My handle is bbenedict. The addiction that I experience while playing that game is deeper than that of crystal meth. If you are still playing, then I will happily face ...

    Oct 19, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An ode to RR

    Randy was a true virtuoso. Zakk is disappointing in the fact that even while he partied with Dimebag, all of his pinches sound the same. Tsk tsk. Kudos on the ...

    Oct 19, 2007


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings