Baranczak

Hi Snorfus! Sorry for the confusion - these are actually typos ( should have edited a bit more carefully!) Bird was actually supposed to be being ( referring to your ...

Hi Hikari, I%u2019m glad you liked the poem! Not surprising that you might be confused about the relationship though - in real life it was friendship for a long time ...

Hi abigailleigh! Thanks for the review, you definitely captured the structure I was aiming for!

Hi Ellie, I%u2019m really happy you liked it - and the poem did actually start out as a kind of gratitude list!

Hi Avis, thank you so much for the review! I really agree with your punctuation suggestions and I%u2019m so happy you liked this poem, it%u2019s actually quite a personal one.

Thanks for the review! I%u2019m glad you liked the poem!

Hi FireEyes! Thanks for the review, I%u2019ll be keeping your suggestions in mind and try reformatting a bit!

Hi again Dossereana! Thank you for another review ( and telling me about the reply function!) Same lay out problems as with the last one unfortunately%u2026I%u2019m going to have to ...

Hi Dossereana! Thanks for the review! I%u2019ve actually had some problems doing my lay out when I copy and paste my work into the publishing center. It seems to turn ...

Thanks for the review! And you%u2019re right, the character was waiting. A long time

Hi Momo! Thank you for the review! I’m glad you liked the poem and thanks for the suggestions!

Hello! Thank you so much for the reviews. I just thought I would help a little by clearing up some things that might not be evident at first. So this ...

I really like the pithiness of this poem. Though it starts out rather jokey and a bit ironic, as you reread and go a bit deeper below the surface humorous ...