Baconator

Fantastic mystical story! Just to start with the nit-picks: I don't think it's necessary to use dialect when the story is told in third person omnicient point of view. You ...

Great story! It was deep, sad, and vivid. An innocent little girl facing a serious real world situation was powerful. The anger of the dad felt towards her seems like ...

Cool story! I dig the invisible force field powers you've got going on with your main character. It leaves the reader in suspense: How did he acquire such powers? Does ...

Amazing poem! I like it's meaning that the subject may be anarchistic, mysterious, and carry a dark aurora to those who first see her, but she has a lot of ...

Absoulutely amazing portrayl of the classic famous movie star! It's humorous yet so true! Just a couple of grammatical errors: Third paragraph, second sentence, change "say" to "stay". Sixth paragraph

Magically epicly hilarious! I'm curious about one thing though. What does "NDB" mean in Chillen in Ron Weasley’s #flyingcar … NDB! I'm not too familiar with texting jargon, so many ...

Very insightful memoir. What amazes me the most is how such an on the surface story has so much more meaning in it than it directly implies. For instance, how ...

For such a short work it felt like a poetic expose' on modern life. While it was really portraying a fictional futuristic pre-apocalyptic corrupted world, it seemed as though it ...

It was cool how you gave insperation personification, as reffering to it as a person or living thing that you are sending a message to. You seemed to find insperation ...

Amazingly creative coming of age and finding your place kind of story. The irony of how the simple yet elaborate creature, the "mountain", is along with his name provides a ...

Very intresting. Reminds me of the books of poetry by Henry Rollins, if you've heard of him. Your portrayal of America's darker points of it's history is revealing how in ...

Epic poem full of imagery and intense descriptiveness! Great word choice. I really liked I love how the night is dark and still, Devoid of any sound. I marvel at ...

I love the rhyme scheme you have set up. I like the simplicity of the poem. It conveys such a deep and personal thing you like to do and makes ...

Amazing story! Kind of used the Tin Man thing from the Wizard of Oz but expanded on it and gave it much deeper meaning. In the second full paragraph, I ...

It was a great story but... it kind of implied that it was a good thing to go towards the car and get killed. Sure, it was a happier ending ...