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Very nice. Good imagery, an abundance of interesting words, and not trying to fit too much into a perfect-length poem make this especially refreshing. Good work. I can't wait to ...

Thank you for reading and replying! The criticism was very helpful. I went back and made some changes... like putting spaces in the chunk of text... :wink: yeah, this is ...

I like this poem a lot. It's short and simple and very modest. I particularly like the images conjured up by the first stanza. I had a very clearly defined ...

beautifully put. i love it.

it was just about a time a few friends and i were enjoying a rainy day by running in the woods and all over the campus where our parents work, ...

This reminds me of the poem "My Papa's Waltz". I thought you had a good ending here - work on knowing what your story is, it seems a little vague, ...

yes, stunned spectators of beauty - i would fall into that category right now. that's gorgeous; i love the way you didn't linger on her pain, just mentioned it, so ...

i like this poem a lot, especially the image of wading through words... We walk centuries deep in words, so many words, so many syllables. great imagery the whole way ...

thanks! yeah, i think i agree, now that i look at it that line does kind of stand out. thanks, that was really helpful!

Have you ever read The Perks of Being a Wallflower ? The style of this poem is similar to the poem "Absolutely Nothing" in that. I like the style, but ...

I really liked this story. It didn't go on about the fact that the narrator could see the ghost and no one else could, just a few details but not ...

wowww... this is great. i love the imagery... you tell a story without telling it, just by giving details. i really like that.