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Re: victim by perspective.
Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciated everything you said, and will definitely take it into account. Also, I didn't exactly specify this above, but this is ...
Feb 12, 2020 -
Re: RELIEF
Seriously thank you so much! This means so much to me!
Feb 11, 2020 -
Re: In Your Hands
I really enjoyed this! Everything was so natural, it flowed right off the tongue. One thought about the line "feelin' even more intense aches" I feel like this line sounds ...
Jan 14, 2020 -
Re: Opposition
Thank you for your review! I totally agree with points you've made. I feel like some of this could have made for sense, more parallel, and fulfilled the mission of ...
Feb 13, 2017 -
Re: Opposition
Thank you so much for your review! About that last stanza, I am specifically taking information about what I believe in my religion. There are specific reasons why God, or ...
Feb 13, 2017 -
Re: Opposition
Thank you so much for your review! About that last stanza, I am specifically taking information about what I believe in my religion. There are specific reasons why God, or ...
Feb 13, 2017 -
Re: Beer Bottle and Pills
If you put something like a period between the poem and the last two lines it'll keep the space. By the way, I loved your poem and I think it ...
Feb 13, 2017 -
Re: Ice Skating, Ice Breaking
Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: Ice Skating, Ice Breaking
Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: Forget to Receive
Hi! Thanks so much for your review. I have had major writers block and I'm really glad you liked it. And I'm honored that I was your first review. I ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: The Finals
Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad that you had a clear picture.
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: The Finals
Thank you so much. I'm writing this for a contest, the theme is Game On. If I win I get meet James Dashner. I'm really glad you liked it.
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Talk to Me
Oh! I see in your description that you had to use certain words, I think you did a great job with that.
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Finally
Hi! Thank you so much on your review. By the way I don't mind nitpicking, it helps me know what writers think, and when you're a writer reading is so ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Finally
Thank you so much! I was a little hesitant to post this, but I can I say that I'm glad I did. I am very glad that you found a ...
Sep 24, 2015
