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  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: victim by perspective.

    Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciated everything you said, and will definitely take it into account. Also, I didn't exactly specify this above, but this is ...

    Feb 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: RELIEF

    Seriously thank you so much! This means so much to me!

    Feb 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: In Your Hands

    I really enjoyed this! Everything was so natural, it flowed right off the tongue. One thought about the line "feelin' even more intense aches" I feel like this line sounds ...

    Jan 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Opposition

    Thank you for your review! I totally agree with points you've made. I feel like some of this could have made for sense, more parallel, and fulfilled the mission of ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Opposition

    Thank you so much for your review! About that last stanza, I am specifically taking information about what I believe in my religion. There are specific reasons why God, or ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Opposition

    Thank you so much for your review! About that last stanza, I am specifically taking information about what I believe in my religion. There are specific reasons why God, or ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Beer Bottle and Pills

    If you put something like a period between the poem and the last two lines it'll keep the space. By the way, I loved your poem and I think it ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Ice Skating, Ice Breaking

    Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Ice Skating, Ice Breaking

    Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forget to Receive

    Hi! Thanks so much for your review. I have had major writers block and I'm really glad you liked it. And I'm honored that I was your first review. I ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Finals

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad that you had a clear picture.

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Finals

    Thank you so much. I'm writing this for a contest, the theme is Game On. If I win I get meet James Dashner. I'm really glad you liked it.

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Talk to Me

    Oh! I see in your description that you had to use certain words, I think you did a great job with that.

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Finally

    Hi! Thank you so much on your review. By the way I don't mind nitpicking, it helps me know what writers think, and when you're a writer reading is so ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Finally

    Thank you so much! I was a little hesitant to post this, but I can I say that I'm glad I did. I am very glad that you found a ...

    Sep 24, 2015


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