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Azila

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Objective of The Game

    Ahoy, Pinky! I said I would come, and I have. Sorry it's so late. :/ I'm not sure what I can say after all these fantastic reviews that you've gotten, ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: --------

    Hi there! I have come, as requested. *bows* You've already gotten some great reviews here, and they really seem to have covered most of the biggest issues, so I'm not ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A good day

    Hi there! This is my 1300th post. Ain't that exciting? ^_^ *ehem* Anyhow. First off, I'm going to point out some typos and stuff like that and then I'll get ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)

    Hi! I've only got a few minutes before I have to go so I'm going to make this review as quick as I can. It's looking good. You've certainly got ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)

    Hiya, Shrubs! First off, you've already gotten a bunch of really thorough reviews, and I didn't really read them fully (because I'm kind of short on time just now) so ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stay True

    I think this is the second poem of yours I've reviewed and I'm really enjoying your style of poetry. Ditto! I really do like your style. Though I did like ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Perfect Life

    Hi Mask! Can I call you that? This poem is really beautiful. I'm not a poet, so I'm not sure how helpful my review will be, but I can tell ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: In a Dream, In the World

    Hi Vee! First off, I'll just warn you that I'm not very knowledgeable when it comes to poetry so if I say something that doesn't seem right, that's probably because ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Inkwell - 1/5

    Hullo! This was lovely, as always. Once again, I am very reminded of Zusak, and once again I am very impressed. Before I get to more overall stuff, I'd just ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 1 (OUTDATED)

    Hi! I'm not really sure if I'll be able to say anything helpful after the thorough reviews you've already had on this, but I shall try my best. Also, I'm ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 8)

    Hullo, sir. I've read all the new parts now, but I'm not going to reply to them individually, I'll just lump it all into one review here. (Plus, I get ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Story Six- The Battle of Liquid Light

    Ahoy there! Thanks for the review request. I'm not going to go through and point out all of the typos and things like that, because I really don't have the ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Do you know her?

    I'm not a poet and I really know nothing about poetry, but when I saw this on Lava's feed, something possessed me to come and review it so here I ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Inkwell

    Hi there! You're new, aren't you? Welcome to the site. I really liked this story, Rose (I hope it's okay for me to call you that)! First I'll talk about ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Bee-Loud Glade by Steve Himmer

    Ahoy there, Hannah! I haven't seen you around much lately. I'm afraid I really don't know anything about writing book reviews, so I may spew nothing but useless nonsense, but ...

    Apr 3, 2011


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