Azila

Hello there, sir! I am here to review according to your request--though I was planning on reviewing it today anyway. In fact, I saw it just after you posted it ...

Hi Camille! I'm sorry that this is a little later than I'd hoped, but hopefully you will find it in you to forgive me. ^.~ It seemed as though nothing ...

Hullo there, Camille! Here I am to review as promised. ^.^ Ayra grinned and looked around, absorbing the sights of dream-blue water, dream-blue sky, and dream-tan skin. I'm a little ...

Hullo, Anzius! Here I am to review, as requested. The first thing I did when I started reading this was scroll down and take a look at how long it ...

Hullo! I don't review much poetry, because (even after taking a college-course on the subject) I really don't know that much about it. But since you requested so politely, I'll ...

Canis! Why didn't you tell me you'd posted something?! Well, I've found it and to show you how useless secrecy is, I shall proceed to rip it to shreds. With ...

Hullo there, Gryphon! TheWalkinDude has already fixed most of your mistakes, I think, so I'm just going to point out a few parts that seemed awkward to me. Most of ...

Hi there, Tiger! I'm here to review as requested. Sorry it took a little longer than I'd hoped. Hatred and fear awoke in us for the very first time, we ...

Hullo there! Deep in thought about how we would thwart the plans of the worlds villains, we barely noticed the cars and smog that hung thick in the summer air. ...

Hullo, sir! By the way, I would review this even if you didn't threaten to kill me, though the fact that you do makes me feel a lot less selfless... ...

Hullo there! There's a stuffed spider monkey named Spike that I've had since I was little. I hope you don't mind, but because of your name I picture you looking ...

Hello, Miss! The world was dark, and all tho se who inhabited it had never seen then real beauty of the world around them. Okay. Firstly, what is that Spoiler ...

Hi! Firstly, I'm sorry that this is so late. I promised you a review a long time ago and I feel bad that I haven't given it to you until ...

Ahoy! I'm sorry that this is so dreadfully late... but better late than never, right? Anyway, onto the review. I don't have many nit-picks, so I have a feeling the ...

Hullo there, sir! Here's your *ehem* requested *ehem* review... He cursed, making his way to the sofa I was sitting on, stumbling slightly along the way. After dropping himself onto ...