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Re: Because I love you
hey kyria3910, first i'll start saying by a nice piece of literature you got there i mean DAMN i am blown away, like that crazy one liner in which the ...
Jul 21, 2015 -
Re: Chances
hey PatternsInPaintChips when i read the little thing in front that they give you know that little summary, i couldn't resist not reading your story, because I love reading confessions. ...
Jul 20, 2015 -
Re: Existential Beat
Fortis epic poem. the thing i am completely blown away is with the starting i thought it was going to be a dark kinda poem but it was not:D. the ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: The Most Beautiful Dream
hey eros, a very short and sweet poem by you. it was lively yet it had a sad feeling to it, it was awesomely epic. i really liked the he ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: A Single Mother (Prologue) (Draft) (W.I.P. title)
hey wickedly good writer i really liked the epilogue of your story, you should keep writing more about this. one thing i liked about your story was the fact that ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 6.3
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May 31, 2015
So deanie I really loved the the title of your story because it has two meanings in itself which I thought was cool. I haven't read all the part's of ... -
Re: Red
I liked the poem all over how it develop's how it grew's more angry. The thing I noticed in this poem was as if the narrator slowly developed rage towards ...
May 24, 2015 -
Re: A Manifesto From the Banished
i 'd like how you incorporated the story and stayed true that it's vague . There was also sometimes when it seemed to be that the protagonist was unclear in ...
May 24, 2015 -
Re: Forever Waiting
Firebird99 first of all i was amazed by the deep meaning of your poem. 2. one question is directed towards love or friendship 3. I loved the ending "i'll be ...
May 24, 2015
