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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Because I love you

    hey kyria3910, first i'll start saying by a nice piece of literature you got there i mean DAMN i am blown away, like that crazy one liner in which the ...

    Jul 21, 2015
  • Other » Other, Lyrical Re: Chances

    hey PatternsInPaintChips when i read the little thing in front that they give you know that little summary, i couldn't resist not reading your story, because I love reading confessions. ...

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Lyrics » Satire, Dramatic Re: Existential Beat

    Fortis epic poem. the thing i am completely blown away is with the starting i thought it was going to be a dark kinda poem but it was not:D. the ...

    Jul 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: The Most Beautiful Dream

    hey eros, a very short and sweet poem by you. it was lively yet it had a sad feeling to it, it was awesomely epic. i really liked the he ...

    Jul 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Fantasy Re: A Single Mother (Prologue) (Draft) (W.I.P. title)

    hey wickedly good writer i really liked the epilogue of your story, you should keep writing more about this. one thing i liked about your story was the fact that ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 6.3

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    So deanie I really loved the the title of your story because it has two meanings in itself which I thought was cool. I haven't read all the part's of ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Red

    I liked the poem all over how it develop's how it grew's more angry. The thing I noticed in this poem was as if the narrator slowly developed rage towards ...

    May 24, 2015
  • Other » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: A Manifesto From the Banished

    i 'd like how you incorporated the story and stayed true that it's vague . There was also sometimes when it seemed to be that the protagonist was unclear in ...

    May 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Forever Waiting

    Firebird99 first of all i was amazed by the deep meaning of your poem. 2. one question is directed towards love or friendship 3. I loved the ending "i'll be ...

    May 24, 2015


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