AyumiGosu17

Wow! Thank you for the mention! I definitely was not expecting that :D

Please don't be discouraged! I love the idea you have started, and I can't wait to see what you do with it. %u2764%uFE0F

What a lovely story! The imagery was perfect, the setting was complete, the transitions and emotions were pure. All in all, I love it. I think this would be a ...

I went back and played with Gael's origin a little. I posted it up as "Chapter 7 pt. 2." I hope I did it justice. This entire story is probably ...

You absolutely nailed it! This whole series is meant to be told from the perspective of a child as this child grows up with a father who was diagnosed with ...

Aw, thanks! That's actually my goal with these little short stories I'm writing; I'm wanting to stir memories for people that are more pleasant when reality gets a little hard. ...

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!

True! I'll have to add that in. Thanks again!

Thank you! I'm saving all of my edits on my original document. Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 are posted.

Thank you! I'm saving all of my edits on my original document. Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 are posted.

I hate it when that happens! Stupid punctuation. XD Thanks for the feedback. I'm saving all of my edits on my original document. Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 are ...

Thank you! I'm saving all of my edits on my original document. Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 are posted.

Thank you! I'm saving all of my edits on my original document. Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 are posted.

Thank you! I'm saving all of my edits on my original document. Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 are posted.