Aylisha

Thank you for the input, I really appreciate it. I'll keep working on my poem skills, I just wanted to try something new.

This poem make my heart warm. It is very simple and elegant ,but also extends the cute factors of kittens. I can totally relate to this poem because my step ...

This is a great way to show writers block. I also like how you incorporated flowing like water or a climb. I feel the same way about writing just not ...

I found your poem interesting, you make a good point in it. I thought it as inspiring. I hope to see more literary works from you. _ -Aylisha:D

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I feel the same way! Great piece, -Aylisha:D

Thank you Joy for the suggestions. And it is totally amazing that we are both thirteen and started yesterday. Your a big help! Aylisha

Thank you for the suggestions, I will work to do better.

The story was wonderful. I loved the fantasy elements in the story the brought it together. I wish you would have explained Sydeny better in the beginning. Overall the story ...