AwesomeSocks

Oh jeez, this made me cry. There are few things that make me cry, but this happens to be one of them. This story invokes so much emotion, in such ...

This is both really sad and really good! "The palpable lie beneath those dark windows to his soul"

It was a nice poem :) I like the flow the rhyming gives it. "Forgive the clouds that make it rain, They spill their tears, Expressing pain."

This is really beautiful! (Then again, maybe I'm just biased because my name is Autumn...? ;)) "A winding trail teeming with life"

I love this! Your use of rhyming was fantastic. Usually a rhyming poem sounds cheesy and dumb because of the restriction of words, but this came of really nicely. "A ...

This is great! I like the rhyming, though it sounded a little constricted. But it flows nicely :) I like how you said "I am unspoken." "You make me smile. ...

I like this :) It gave me chills. Personally, I don't remember 9-11. But it sounds horrible (duh), and I know it was painful for a lot of people (especially ...

I really like this :) It's short and to the point (literally :P) "Paint me a picture, A splatter of red,"

This is really deep. I can totally see this as a song. Like the rating implies, it is a little disturbing, but I still like it :) It's very raw, ...

I really like this poem :) It's deep, and I like the shift in the middle. The beginning takes on a different meaning after the shift. The words may be ...

This is great :) I like the repetition of the word "one" in the first three stanzas. It gave it some nice rhythm. "Death is a carnivore, a beast"

I love the idea of this poem! It speaks loudly to me :) There were a few confusing points caused by grammatical error, such as this: "This man made issue." ...

I really like this poem :) It flows nicely and has great rhythm. "I had a desire for revenge Then I remembered Nothing could confront The waves of death" I ...

This is WONDERFUL!!!! It made me laugh so hard! I love Romeo and Juliet, but I also love chatspeak fanfictions, so this is great! I definitely hope to read more ...

I love your writing. It never fails to be deep and descriptive! One thing that irks me is your use of periods. It might flow better if you used commas, ...