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I am going to be very careful now... since I keep submitting as a comment on accident >.< Hopefully I'll get the hang of it soon... This does sound pretty ...

I DID IT AGAIN!! CURSES!! This is a review T.T Ooh, I like this! I don't know about anyone else, but I find this deeply resonates with me :) My ...

Oh! I just realised the words along the sides not only go with the poem but also go with each other! Woah! Mind = BLOWN. :o Well, anyway... that is ...

I met to submit that as a review T.T This new policy of checking if it's a review confuses me... *sigh* This is beautiful! Many of the words you used ...

This was pretty cool! I don't usually like stories that take place in the early 1900's, because they are usually dull and the characters either lead "normal, perfect" lives, or ...

I love this! The reference to Cinderella while keeping with your original feelings is fantastic! Actually, your writing style reminds me a lot of mine... O.O (At least for poetry) ...

I'm sorry, but this didn't really hold my attention. Part of the reason was because it was so difficult to read. You have many run-on sentences and mis-placed apostrophes, but ...

This is beautiful :) I can sense your true feelings poured out into this poem, so much that it almost made me cry. "I'll look to the stars/ And scream ...

Going off of what tgirly said, maybe you could change 'fly' to 'go'? Just a suggestion. Anyway, love this! Contrast between water and sky, very nice :) I liked the ...

Very nice! This actually gave me the image of a boiling hot summer... and it's November! :o I really enjoyed this haiku. I don't think I've ever seen a haiku ...

Ooh, this is really cool! Nice vocabulary :) I was a little confused about the first stanza. I didn't get this part --> "severe the start." But maybe it's just ...

Okay, so I really love this! It's VERY powerful, you really have a way with words! I know it's very hard to write a good poem that rhymes. Pretty much ...

This is suuper amazing :D Strong vocabulary, flows nicely. It left a few questions in my mind, such as 'what was this steel fang?' Although, not in a bad way ...

I like the feel of this story. It's about something as simple as incense, yet you give a deep meaning... super cool ^_^ There were a few grammatical errors, easily ...

This is really wonderful :) I loved your choice of words throughout the piece, very beautiful! "frantic paranoia, trickling through an hourglass -"