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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Pieces

    Thanks for the input, glad you liked it!

    Nov 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Pieces

    Thank you! I didn't really write it with dissociation in mind, but it does make sense!

    Nov 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Pieces

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

    Nov 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Pieces

    Thank you!

    Nov 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Pieces

    Thanks for the review!

    Nov 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: twin waves

    Hi, I don't really have time right now to do a full review, but I just wanted to say, I really liked this and it was super creative how you ...

    Nov 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Mountaintop

    Thanks for your review! Glad you enjoyed ^-^

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Mountaintop

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it ^-^

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Waiting

    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!

    Aug 26, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Waiting

    Hi Plume, thanks so much for the review and your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed! ^-^

    Aug 25, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Waiting

    Hi Mordax, thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate all your feedback, and I'll definitely consider working on merging the two poems. Thank you so much for all ...

    Aug 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: When the world has burned

    Hi, thanks for the review! ^-^

    Aug 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: When the world has burned

    Hi, just wanted to let you know, I edited it a bit to try and improve the syllable count and flow of it (it's not perfect, but I think it's ...

    Aug 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: When the world has burned

    Hi Miecz, thank you for the review and feedback. It really means a lot to hear that my work touched you so deeply. Thank you so much and I hope ...

    Aug 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: When the world has burned

    Hi Lizzy, thanks for the review! I really appreciate your feedback on different parts of the poem and especially your insight on the syllable count. Have a great day ^-^

    Aug 17, 2021


What holds you betwixt panic and serenity? That is, if it's not among the many querulous quagmires unfit for elaboration.
— soundofmind as Emiliano Achillinus