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Hello! Thanks for the review. I did use the words 'it' and 'stuff' a lot on purpose, to make it more.. confusing, I was trying for confusing. Thanks for pointing ...

@TahaT11n Here you are...

Hurray! great job hermano, you made the spotlight!

le sigh It's a hard choice... I don't know. I wish there was a way I could combine the two. To make it like... maybe happy and dead? It is ...

Is that a little better?

Thanks for the review! Don't laugh, I forgot all about punctuation... Oops. I'll fix that :) I think you totally got this poem, I'm not so sure about the end ...

Umm... Tu vas perezoso... I think...

Learn your Spanish already man!

Um Nate, it's "Si', not 'se'

Pigeon poop is the best way to solve problems. %u2014 Pompadour

Does reading a review in poem style make it harder to read or understand?

Burning houses are really cool except for the people who lived there. And the chipmunks in the attic

I totally agree with what you say about word choice and elimination. The great jazz player Charles Mingus once said, "Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, ...

First off, thanks for the review! This work is sort of a poem; although not in the traditional sense. It is kind of a mix between an actual short story ...

idek... I wish I did tho