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Wow, thank you very much! I'm very unsure of the pacing and ending, but not as much thanks to your review! Thanks!

Thanks!

You're welcome ^^

I'll admit, I didn't want to go to the trouble of reading this, but I'm so glad I did. This is hauntingly beautiful, I'd love to write like this. Great ...

This is a review, I just messed up the one below so I deleted it and added this instead. Sorry for the confusion!

Thank you very much! You have me a lot of good ideas, I'll either expand or at least change the story, thanks!

Thank you! This was very helpful!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

After reading it again, I understand it, but it feels like a bit much. Might just be personal opinion, but still consider simplifying.

Thanks!

Fixed. Oh and by the way, I've tried to write Novellas from my short stories before, but I always like them better when they're short like this. There's actually a ...