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Heeeeeeeeeeeeey Biffle! :P I've already read this story...but I'll comment on it anyway. Hm uh, I'd take out the 'darn' in the first sentence. Also, if the guy is picking ...

Really, really liked this. I loved the twist in the was very original. However I felt like a bit more describing could be done, perhaps a little more in length, ...

I agree with Toto25, it is a very thought provoking poem. It reminds me of a mother thats given up her child...not sure why. Other guesses would be a soulmate ...

Hey Olli, sorry I've taken forever to give this a review. Anywhoos, yeah, basically, it was good, but really short. Add a bit more to it maybe? I especially love ...

It's good. The dog suddenly showing up is a little random, but yeah it's okay. To be honest, this story is a bit too trying to be an emo romance, ...

Haha it's funny as, this is the second parody of Twilight I've read, and I love it...was this based on that stalker chick who went out to dinner with Edward ...

I really liked this. There were a few minor spelling errors, but other than that, it was a cool concept on the whole issue of love. I like the title, ...

Hmm, it was good. I loved the sudden change in the middle of the story, the sentence 'And then I realize what I've done' was a very good turn of ...

Hmm I like it. Haha mostly cuz I write stuff like this but yeah, it's cool. Like the person before said, proably give it a bit more of a backdrop, ...

I liked this, nice emotion to it. But you might want to make it a bit longer, perhaps describe a bit more who it was that was hitting her, why ...

I really liked this! I like writing about this sort of stuff, and your imagery in this piece was brilliant! I especially liked the sentence 'Now I stood here the ...

Hi. I like this poem. I'm not gonna bother with any of the spelling or grammatical stuff so I'll just say that perhaps you could make it a little longer, ...

Hey Kayla :) Sorry it took me so long to review lol. Anyway, I wont bother with spelling and stuff, so I'll just go ahead and say I liked this ...

Hello. The bit about the girl in the hallway is interesting, and I want to read more about that. As for the ending, the only bit I didn't really like ...

I found this really interesting. It was good, and it was also hopeful for the rest of the world who aren't yet on their way to God's Kingdom, because it ...