AustereMelodies

I appreciate it greatly! Any bit of outside advice or input from someone is welcomed!! I agree completely on what you said about emotions. It can't be more true. Thank ...

Thanks for the input! (:

Thanks a lot for your review. (: I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the comments! Maybe I'll revise it later to hopefully have it make a little ...

Hey, thanks for you input! I think that's a really fair point about the verbs and the meaning. I'll keep that in mind when I write stuff in the future, ...

Thank you for the input! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :DD

Thank you! I was hoping to make it sound a little breathless, since she was supposed to be struggling a little. Thanks for reading!

That's my favorite too! Haha. Thank you! (:

Thanks so much!!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thank you so much! I'll work on fixing that last bit. (x

The answer to your question is both. xD An old woman remembering friends from a long time ago who were gone/ dead. And thank you!

No problem. Hope it helps! (:

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Hey there, Tigerlilly37! I have to agree with everyone else on this: your poem is beautifully written! I thought that your descriptions and language were very lyrical, overall, and additionally ...

Hiya jessethought! To begin I would just like to say how much I enjoyed this poem of yours -- specifically the ending! I sort of liked how the first two ...