Aurora

BUBBLE, I think your story so far is great. I really enjoy the heightened vocabularly. The overall tone of your writing is that of a mystery novel and so is ...

Alright I think your story is pretty interesting so far. I think it is cool you got the idea from that Dynasty warriors game. I have actually played the demo ...

Yeah this grabbed my attention. I am really curious to know what it is going to be about. I felt like it was well-written and flowed nicely. The way you ...

I loved this!!! I really liked what you were saying, because it is so true. People waste so much time (me included) infront of the TV and stuff, wishing amazing ...

I loved that story! It was extremely well-written and you are very talented. I think it was a great short story. I felt it was very smart of you to ...

Wow I really liked that a lot!!!!! It was very unique! The whole cliche thing was really clever. It was funny too. I loved the relationship between Tess and Alec. ...

I thought that was beautiful. It was extremely well-written and all very moving. The language you used was so vivid. I enjoyed it a lot. It was also all very ...

I really liked this story! It caught my attention definitely and was all full of emotion and excitement. I could really feel the protaganist's passion. Orion was a good villain ...

I thought this was pretty good. I like how it is just the typical life of a teenager besides the catsuit girl and stuff. All the dialogue was pretty realistic ...

Okay, when I first started reading this I struggled to understand what was going on. Once I finished it and read Megan's conversation with the doctor again I understood. I ...