Audy

Hello PurpleEurope, Hehe, I actually like your title for this piece which was what drew me to it ^^; I think it's cute and it suits the poem itself. So ...

ethanswish, Out of curiosity I did a quick google search of your title. Hmm. ;) Have you rated this correctly? In either case, this has become an instant favorite. I ...

567ajt, Not bad. The images here are fantastic, in a dark sort of way. Specifically loved the first stanza, A silent rendition Of the art of murder loved that line, ...

Cailey, This is a cute poem. A nice exercise in rhyming, was it? Actually, I picked it to review because it reminds me of some of my earliest poems. I ...

Hello Shinrai, I see this is filed under "Dramatic Poetry", but it is not dramatic, darling. All those rhymes, how could it be anything but lyrical? :D When you think ...

Hello formslipper, I had to read this several times, but in a good way. It's not everyday I get to enjoy a poem that challenges me and provokes thoughtful meditations. ...

...makes me stronger. ;) Hello, Lynnette! I'm Audy and I must say, this was a pleasure to read. Great beginning, really did get my attention, and what held me? Your ...

Hello, It's nice to meet you. As requested, I'll try to review as honestly as possible. I agree with a lot of what's been said. Mainly, the first sentence is ...

Hello hockeyfan, I'm Audy. I agree very much with Apple and with much to add. I read through this and I am left wanting more. Not that I'm particularly excited ...

Lovely imagery! I liked the winter/summer metaphors actually. The paleness/melting ice versus the coral/pebble/sea. It really creates a sense of that 'contradiction'. Need to change 'their' (5th line

Intriguing first chapter, but somewhat short. At first I'm thinking the pencil is just hovering around on its own, it's only until you mention that there's a hand that I ...

Hiya Pen, It's been a long while since I've last been on YWS; so bear with me, as I'm a little rusty. Some things I should point out: upon first ...

Hey cagedheart, The poem's in the right place ;) It's very lyrical indeed. I like how you managed to bring similes and metaphors with each stanza, I commend you for ...

Hey Rascal, I like this - I like the idea and how you went about this. It's pretty well written, and flows okay. You've got the bones and structure of ...

Hey nonfiction, Just an honest review of sorts. I liked this. In a poem of such few words you've captured such complex emotions - but remember to make the words ...