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Lyria, Love this piece. So many people when approaching political subjects such as this one, they tend to rant-rant-rant about their own beliefs, so what I like about this piece ...

MMM, You will forgive me if my interpretation is off, but is the title meant to be ironic? Or is what the poem here expressing, really the essence of intimacy? ...

Mikepyro, I apologize for the wait. Granted, I enjoyed this story very much ^-^ It was funny and also a bit terrifying at parts, which is great! Can you please, ...

Lumi, I loved this. See, I was just talking to someone just the other day about how scary weddings can be and you managed to capture everything I felt about ...

Tinkembell, First off, I'd just like to say I love The Beatles. So, great song choice! I was surprised with the direction that this took, though. When I think of ...

Blue, Okay, I lied. One more for tonight. Alright, so straight off the bat we're getting to know more and more about Jack. Still don't know his surname though. Oh ...

BlueAfrica, I can tell that you've worked hard on this, so I'm excited to review it! He sat in a corner booth at Yee-haw’s, Not the most effective opening. The ...

Becca, This is LONG overdue. So you get a bonus. A super-long review from me. I'm going to start by saying that I absolutely love the topic/subject you've chosen for ...

Deanie, Hehe. This was too cute. I laughed in several places ^_^ I agree with most of the reviewers above and Ahmadblues made a good point, would've liked you to ...

Mikko,

Pup! Alright so I gave you my general thoughts last night. The piece has an overall musicality to it that is pleasing to the ear, the rhythm you've captured quite ...

Deanie, Great poem. There are some real strong emotions here, and rhyming to boot, that's no easy feat. This is enjoyable despite the lack of metaphor or figurative language - ...

SmylinG, I can relate to this, I'm part Spanish myself. So all the little imagery inserted here and there probably touched me more profoundly. All the grandparents, cousins, Santana, The ...

LosCadaver, ^_^ The revision is a lot better. Your intent is definitely clear and well executed. I don't know much about cowboy poetry, but there's definitely this sort of western ...

LosCadaver, You've received some wonderful reviews. I'm looking at the revised version here. I've read some of your poetry, but have yet to do a proper review so here I ...