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Retro! I am super excited about this piece. When we last spoke (or I guess, when I last ventured to your corner of the webs!) I asked for a bit ...

Hey Meg! So, we've got a speaker (a lady knight!) addressing her fellow, thus, another lady knight. The first stanza states that the Lady's mistake comes from seeing through a ...

Sparkie! Love this! I think you do a great job with all your fantastic and beautiful imagery that in turn give this piece a lot of beauty and heart. There ...

Hey Weymouth! Diction-wise, I like the route of these haunting words, they're vivid too which makes it all that much more enjoyable. Immediately in Line 1, tattered isn't the kind ...

Hey Tinydancer! :o I feel like it's been a while since I've read one of your poems, and I'm actually kind of glad to see this one and to see ...

Hey Retro, I feel this poem was going the dramatic route, and I don't know if it was really successful in that regard, I actually found this kind of bland. ...

Hey Certainly Love! So, my first impressions of this is that we have a love story blooming between Jane and the dangerous/mysterious Mr. Daniel, and there seems to be a ...

Weymouth! I really like the premise and the idea behind this piece, I think the metaphor and the image of the ash to help support the idea of losing a ...

Le Pomp! I wouldn't say this poem is rubbish at all, in fact there are so many lovely gems in this that I can sink my teeth into, plenty in ...

Joshua! Looong time! she has a habit of hurling spanners into the cogs of my otherwise functioning existence. XD Can I just point out that I love that word, spanners. ...

Hey Writingwolf, I like where you are feeling strongly about a subject and it takes a certain kind of bravery to speak one's opinion about such controversial issues, so in ...

Hey Dragon, I actually agree with what Kyllorac had to say about a lot of the content/interpretations. I also interpreted the poem as transphobic/racist in parts, was this your intention? ...

Hey Auxxi Indent: "Our land has always been here.. (no closing tag) -> Indent: "Until one day... (no closing tag) -> Indent: "The spirits furious ... we could not survive ...

Hey Rhia ^^ So, this poem is cute in a way. I read it as a light hearted romance, or a treatise on relationships where you have the image of ...

Hello Rhia! I'm back again, and so this poem amused me greatly and I love the details in this. I adored the poem ^_^ I think it tells a wonderful ...