Audrey718

It was nice. A couple of grammar errors. It was a bit too long, for my tastes, but it was a good plot line and everything. You did quite a ...

Very nice. I really enjoyed it. For a 15 minute poem, this is very very well written!

This is great! I love how it gives the facts, but still captures you! Also, welcome to YWS! What a great story! I look forward to reading more on it!

I'm not a poet, or that old, but I like it. It's a very emotional poem, but nice. You did a great job with it!

Very nicely written. you include yur feelings, setting, and characters very well. Great job!

Thank you, and thank you! I'm fixing those errors now! :)

Beautiful piece. Not that I'm an expert poet or anything, but I liked it. I didn't see any grammar faults and it flowed very nicely. What was your main theme ...

That was an awesome dragon! I have a story called the Baby Dragon. If you like stories, you might want to read it!

That was awesome. I love it. PERIOD. I love it and that is all there is to it. I will be reading the first chapter when it comes out, or ...

Very nice. I like it and have no bad comments about it! Great Job, and i hope to read some more wonderful poems by you! Audrey718

Thanks for the review! I'll get to those grammar errors! ~Audrey718~