Attolia

Hiii! So when I first read this, nothing jumped out at me, because you're too amazing and this does read like a published work, but it's review day so I'm ...

I look back up, immediately regretting it. Standing behind Jamie is an old woman with sagged skin and white hair. We’ve either acquired a new housemate, who happens to be ...

I love this so far!! You have a great voice, and it's the kind of story that you know will be tragic, so you get that sinking feeling in your ...

Hellooooo… it’s me. (Couldn’t resist.) First paragraph: two people close to me did civil engineering, and from what I’ve gathered bridges were a very small part of it. Just to ...

Hi Skins! You helped me with my attempt at a novel many years ago, and now I’m going to try to return the favor. I’ve been stalking this project since ...

Hi moonpolice, I'm Attolia. You look like you know what you're doing - good job. Regarding the title, I would recommend against it; there's a very popular book series and ...

Hey Messenger! I liked this piece too. Especially the bit about the wordless communication between the protagonist and the captain before he jumps off, for some reason. Now, everyone else ...

Hi Messenger, I'm Attolia! So overall you have a good piece here. You don't info-dump us with descriptions of your fantasy world or the character's place in it or what's ...

Hey Pigeon! So, I'm very out of reviewing shape (and was never that good to begin with), so take this all with a grain of salt. First of all, I ...

I really liked this! I know that's like the most generic comment ever, but I did. It's the first thing in a while on the general fiction stories list that ...

Content aside, your writing has a sort of flow and ease that I am envious of. I stalked your portfolio (mostly only the Grae story) and found this to be ...

I'm sorry, but this is just full of largely inaccurate generalizations and stereotypes, to the point where I have absolutely no respect for it. I'm all for criticism of one's ...

I just want to correct the historical allusion to Henry VIII, I'll try to refrain from commenting on the content because it is unnecessary and has already been thoroughly done, ...

Hey. Sorry this is kind of late in regards to your deadline; hopefully you'll see this before you have to turn it in. I slowly opened the black mailbox and ...

Hey, I liked this. Good writing, good subject. I really like how you juxtaposed her words with her concentration on the sand castle. “She’s lying down at home,” Maddie told ...