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Hello there, Mikothegreat! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! ^-^ "Mom I can't sleep! can you tell me a story?" Rain asked pleading with me. "Why can't you fall ...

Hello there, Eros! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ "Maria, have you finished packing your books or are they still overflowing from the cupboard? And I already told ...

Hello there, Sharon1407! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ The capitalization of the word "Life" caught my eye right from the beginning. I agree with the previous reviewer ...

Hello there, DeepRoses! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I truly apologize that in my last review on one of your poems, you seemed to disagree with my ...

Hello there, GreenTulip! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! ^-^ Glimmering sunshine, Gives into the allusion Of warmth and happiness. Though it is all a lie. I'm not the ...

Hello there, Nishthabawa2896! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ First things first, I don't speak Hindi. YWS primarily consists of English users, and it isn't a surprise that ...

Hello there, Remembrance! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ The use of punctuation, I have found, is inconsistent. On that screen in front of him He stood, Inconsistent ...

Hello there, Pastelqueen! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ The length of this poem kind of makes it less enjoyable to me. I feel as if it's filled ...

Hello there, CuriosityCat2! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I would like to point out the title of the poem, which is simply just called, "My short poem." ...

Hello there, Casanova! ^-^ This is Moonwatcher here for another review! I'm happy to see another installment of your novel. This is a nice, and short chapter, but longer than ...

Hello there, Pendr! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! I would like to point out that the poem is labeled as satire. sat·ire ˈsaˌtī(ə)r/ noun the use of humor, ...

Hello there, KanekiManjushage! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I feel as if the poem is extremely choppy. There's abrupt stops, and every line is very short. There's ...

Hello there, Alliyah! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! ^-^ I would like to bring up the use of stanzas in this poem. I think it could benefit from ...

Hey there, Casanova! This is Moonwatcher here with another review! ^-^ Yooo, so this is one thing I forgot to mention in my last review for another chapter of yours. ...

Hello there, GreenTulip! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! ^-^ (please be considerate and ignore any typos you may find, i'm on mobile and writing a mobile review is ...