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Thanks! Yeah, the sentences will be longer and less choppy. The book is her thoughts, and later on, some dialogue. So in the beginning, her thoughts are short and simple ...

The eyebrows are a little creepy though. I usually do this: :D

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Thanks! I do have more to the story, but I'm going to wait for some reviews before I post it. UGH YES! Mostly Rudy though. I don't cry reading fictional ...

This was in the literary spotlight...

I could smell the books and rain while reading this. I could see the tree branches moving, the rain pouring down the windows. I could hear the rain pounding on ...

Thanks! Yeah, I'm definitely not keeping the short sentences throughout the whole story, if I continue.

Holy sugar plums. It's a thing now.

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Is this the most liked YWS work ever?

I fell right into that one. Although I was kind of expecting a Rick Roll.

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