Asteria

Hey! Asteria here with a review. Firstly, I like what I've read overall. The poem is concise without being laconic, which is something I find I've an issue with when ...

Hey, Kelpies! Asteria here with a review. Where the grammar has already been touched on, I'll focus on the content. I want to know more about what the characters are ...

Hey, Asteria here to review! I like the feeling that this poem brings forth. To describe the possibilities of a blank canvas in such literal terms, using the examples to ...

Hey, there! Asteria here with a review! Alright, the first thing I'm noticing is a lack of description for their overall surroundings. I'm unable to see where this conversation is ...

Hey, Asteria here to review! The first thing that I noticed was what felt like a contradiction. In the first few sentences, you wrote about how they were confused, staring ...

Where I just read your sonnet and loved it so much, I thought I'd make my way over to another piece of yours and see if I felt the same ...

There is so much I could say about this sonnet, but I'll put it simply: I love the imagery and feeling behind this piece. I can feel what you feel ...

After reading the preceding chapters of this series, let me start by saying you've improved tenfold in your overall structure, grammar and spelling! The difference is night and day from ...

After reading this, and the review that you've already had, I agree with their summation that the imagery is amazing, vivid. The way you've captured the scene, I feel as ...

First off, I have to say that I love this poem in its entirety. The way you've captured the feeling of taking in this smile, the way it's so captivating ...