AspiringAuthorA..M.

Hello. *Waves hand* OK, for the most part your lyrics were easy to understand. I'm not a musical person so I can't say if the consistency of your repetition was ...

Ah. That's quite a name you've got there, Eclipse. Did a package of mine get sent to your house or something? That is just awkward. How about, "Ah, that's" :?: ...

Wow, that was one big block of text. It is much too overwhelming. Here allow me to suggest how to break it up. Rina walked home since the bus wasn't ...

Jason grinned at the phone and said, “Ladies and gentlemen, do not try this at home.” He pedaled speedily towards the home made ramp. Just as the back wheel left ...

Twilight. To tell you just how horrendous I think it was I did not get further than a few sentences. Seriously, I was like, what is this? The writing was ...

Our metamorphosis was long and drawn out, not like the short process of our relatives, the butterfly. No, we were not insects, we were somewhat human, but my ancestors coveted ...

Hello again. Hm, I trying to decide to either post a brief comment of suggestions, or do another long and grueling grammar and content review. Well, I guess I'll go ...

A man was there, armed with several different guns. He was on the ground, clawing wildly at his skin. There were scratches all over his arms. She backed up , ...

The thing had bent over, resting on all fours like an animal, and seemed to choke. Its mouth opened wide, and in the faint light of the now dying flashlight, ...

Our hero had started at the sight, and aimed his gun. But as the humanoid hadn’t given any indication of rising or attacking in any way, and still lay on ...

Here I am, the Insane Writer. :smt059 His home was hidden from most of the world, deep in the forest. No one knew about it, since no one knew about ...

As her father crossed the road - uncaring, his eyes still spilling delicate, salty drops and not knowing anything except the feeling of his heart being torn, still praying for ...

The first sentence hooked my immediately. But, I find it odd how it was explained as if some God-like force saw it and nobody else. That is what happened right? ...

You were hit by a car at the age of nine? :( Glad you're OK. :D Before I start, a little compliment. I envy you for the ability to make ...

See, Light_Devil!? What did I tell you? :wink: Something tells me I won't find another piece that has affected me with such emotion. You have a gift. Refer to my ...