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The Lovely Bones. The narrator is boring, and her family's reactions to her death are so cliche. And just why exactly did a, however old the girl was, decide to ...

“Hum, it smells good in here Belle. I’m hoping that means Gary didn’t cook,” Joe Don smiled, giving off some holiday humor. I believe you meant, "guessing". "I'm guessing that ...

Hello Sarah, I'm here as your sometimes brutal reviewer. Please, if anything I say in anyway makes you feel sad tell me immediately. I will see to it that I ...

Well hello there again. Darn technical goof ups. “What?” she opened her eyes… but it didn’t seem like they were open. Her surroundings were as dark as they would be ...

Hello Captain Crunch, I'll be your evil reviewer tonight. Alright, before I start let me just tell you that your title had me assuming that this would be about a ...

Christmas Eve, and I sat shivering in the trenches, my body covered in frozen mud. Gunshots and explosions rang out around me, and the pain as the reverberating soundwaves all ...

“People of Britain. On this day of 3rd September 1939, Britain and France are at war with Germany, following the invasion of Poland two days ago.” The radio crackled and ...

OK first of all with my over active imagination I was able to form a picture of what was happening in your story fairly easily. But I'm able to conjure ...

Like your previous posters, I love the Kingdom Hearts series. First off, before I go into your story. I really was never very familiar with Namine. I just played the ...

First off, I'm amazed at how quickly you came up with a story as soon as I told you about my contest. Anyway, as far as the content of your ...

Hello there homie, hehe, I've always wanted to say that. Long rows of dark grey clouds swam through the deep black ocean; littered only by a vague glisten of a ...

Your curse has destroyed all things I hold close. Now I fear that you have passed on your disease to me. I hate everyone around me, and everyone around me ...

Well, I must salute you, that was perhaps the funniest thing I have ever had the pleasure of reading. But here are a few things that I must bite you ...

*The browser closed me out of my reviewing session, so yeah, I'm mad at my computer right now. By the way, I was doing your review while it happened* :( ...

Goodness, I've been looking for that book everywhere. But then again, it's supposed to be written in a silly style from what I've heard. I personally don't think I'd like ...