Asith

Thanks! It's interesting that you bring up the simply finally thing. When I wrote it, I remember it seeming fine, but now, it does read a little clunky.

Thanks!

Wooo

That's such a flattering compliment! Thanks!

:)

I have no guesses, I'll just have to read it when it's out :0

Woo, glad you liked it! Thanks for pointing out those little inconsistencies, that's exactly the type of stuff I hoped someone would catch for me

Aww, that's great. I hope you feel less pain though :)

Definitely! The first draft should always just be for fun, it's never going to be perfect. Good luck editing it, and good luck with anything else you write too!

Um okay, that's kind of the point!

Glad you liked it :)

A really helpful review, thanks!

I'd be glad to, but don't rush yourself too much :)

Good for you! For the record though, it's not necessarily a bad idea to write down all the exciting ideas first. You can always go back and edit the chapters ...

That sounds really cool actually! I look forward to reading it