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Thanks for writing this. I couldn’t put boredom into words but you did it wonderfully. Great job. There are boring people all over and I like how this portrays the ...

Thanks for writing this. I couldn’t put boredom into words but you did it wonderfully. Great job. There are boring people all over and I like how this portrays the ...

Yep it definitely did! :) ~Cheers11

Sorey computer typing stuff twice :/

You are correct, I was wanting the reader to tkae the poem as they wanted and take it however they wanted

Thanks for writing this. I couldn’t put boredom into words but you did it wonderfully. Great job. There are boring people all over and I like how this portrays the ...

Ok, and thank you! ~Cheers!!

Your welcome, I hope I wasn't too harsh. :)

Hi, thanks for the comments. I hope you liked this poem because it only took me 25 minutes and a bunch of yelling at my frozen computer. I will be ...

Very deep, and meaningful. I just have a few suggestions. 1. maybe you could more in depth with the feeling of abandonment and love. 2. (there's nothing else) I just ...

I don't even know how to explain what I was thinking as I read this. The story was deep, and it explained the human soul in under one page. It ...

Overall the song is good but maybe make the chorus more structured. I'm more of a novel writer than a song writer but I try my best