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Re: Flower Girl
Thanks!! Keep writing and being awsome! :)
Thu Feb 01, 2018 7:51 pm -
Re: you swallowed me whole
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Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:13 am
The poem kind of repeats with the I’s and the me’s and the you’s I kind of got stuck on that fact. And I didn’t get why you stopped after ... -
Re: Pretty
Thanks!! :)
Sat Jan 27, 2018 6:05 pm -
Re: Pretty
Thanks!! :)
Thu Jan 25, 2018 11:40 am -
Re: Pretty
Thanks!! :)
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Re: Fear
This was more like a short story of sorts but I get what your saying and I%u2019ll take that into account when I write my next poem. Now I%u2019ve got ...
Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:03 am -
Re: Pretty
Thanks!! :)
Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:01 am -
Re: Pretty
Thank you!! :)
Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:04 pm -
Re: Pretty
I wanted who ever was reading to decide what made the girl pretty in their own opinion and to decide what natural beauty is in their own opinion. Because my ...
Wed Jan 24, 2018 9:32 pm -
Re: Porcelain Mask
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Wed Jan 24, 2018 9:03 pm
Hey Ashley here with a review (of sorts) First of all when you say “That I am” it doesn’t flow with the rest of the paragraph, it kind of made ... -
Re: Someone Strike The Liberty Bell.
Is this about self harm?? Im just going to go with that..... This poem correctly portays the hardhsips of a self-harmer and the demons that one has within and thr ...
Wed Jan 24, 2018 8:55 pm -
Re: Fear
Thanks for the review, I see where my mistakes were and im fixing them. This is just a rough draft (I hope). ~Cheers
Wed Jan 24, 2018 8:44 pm -
Re: Fear
No problem. :)
Wed Jan 24, 2018 8:41 pm -
Re: Fear
Thanks for the review! I wanted to write a %u201Cshort story%u201D on the feeling one gets when they hallucination and how they believe that they can%u2019t live without these hallucinations ...
Wed Jan 24, 2018 6:04 pm -
Re: Her and her and her
Your welcome!!! ~Cheerd!!
Wed Jan 24, 2018 3:13 pm
