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Ashley602338

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flower Girl

    Thanks!! Keep writing and being awsome! :)

    Feb 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: you swallowed me whole

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    The poem kind of repeats with the I’s and the me’s and the you’s I kind of got stuck on that fact. And I didn’t get why you stopped after ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Pretty

    Thanks!! :)

    Jan 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Pretty

    Thanks!! :)

    Jan 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Pretty

    Thanks!! :)

    Jan 25, 2018
  • Other » Horror, Realistic Re: Fear

    This was more like a short story of sorts but I get what your saying and I%u2019ll take that into account when I write my next poem. Now I%u2019ve got ...

    Jan 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Pretty

    Thanks!! :)

    Jan 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Pretty

    Thank you!! :)

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Pretty

    I wanted who ever was reading to decide what made the girl pretty in their own opinion and to decide what natural beauty is in their own opinion. Because my ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Porcelain Mask

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    Hey Ashley here with a review (of sorts) First of all when you say “That I am” it doesn’t flow with the rest of the paragraph, it kind of made ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Someone Strike The Liberty Bell.

    Is this about self harm?? Im just going to go with that..... This poem correctly portays the hardhsips of a self-harmer and the demons that one has within and thr ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Other » Horror, Realistic Re: Fear

    Thanks for the review, I see where my mistakes were and im fixing them. This is just a rough draft (I hope). ~Cheers

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Other » Horror, Realistic Re: Fear

    No problem. :)

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Other » Horror, Realistic Re: Fear

    Thanks for the review! I wanted to write a %u201Cshort story%u201D on the feeling one gets when they hallucination and how they believe that they can%u2019t live without these hallucinations ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Her and her and her

    Your welcome!!! ~Cheerd!!

    Jan 24, 2018


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