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Re: The Beautiful Secret.
Writing is categorized based on intent. A short story isn't just a bunch of words to create paragraphs. The intent is to tell a story, whether you agree with me ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: The Beautiful Secret.
Yesss thank you so much!!!
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Beneath the Willow
Oh sorry, my mistake. I could've sworn it said your age was 14. I apologize. This is great writing, don't get me wrong, but how could a poem not convey ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: The Beautiful Secret.
A short story is not supposed to be vague. Poems can be but short stories are the telling of a story. The vagueness loses the reader in the story. A ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Lies.
thats the thing, everyone has been betrayed by a significant other, so changing it out with him or her would not have killed the relativity, it just felt to me ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: I See
She wasn't trying to be hurtful. She is right, it doesn't have a rhythm to it. It however does have potential and could be a base to a great poem ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: The Joker: An inner monologue.
Thank you for being my first review!! I wish blessings of rhyming brilliance onto you. This review really made my day. Thank you!!!
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: The Joker: An inner monologue.
Thank you!
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: The Joker: An inner monologue.
Thank you for being brutally honest, there are a few things I need to fix, thank u for pointing it out to me
Apr 3, 2015