Asher123

Thanks man this helped a lot.

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i carefully composed this story. Joseph and his beautiful wife are educated; Joseph work as a driver in a reputable company in Lagos Nigeria while Patricia is a trained nurse ...

I always welcome criticism. Thank you for reviewing my story. :D

Thank you for your kind words Kam :-) i appreciate your support and i will look into it and try to lengthen it. Good day to you too.

This is great and has the potential to be a great movie. I personally think that this is brilliantly written and you expertly connect the Beginning with the End. I ...

This is well..... great and i think it just needs a little more of an effort to make it more engaging in the Entertainment department. But Good Job anyways.