Asher123

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with what i saw i assume you are a genius and a talented personality in this craft - i am glad to read your story. it is something i love ...

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A/N: I appreciate everyone who reviewed both (or one) part/s of my prologue. I am currently working on revising given the suggestions and feedback. Here is the first chapter that ...

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e A Paragraph in: Okay, this is a sort of stupid viewpoint and I can make up a thousand reasons why the internet is great, but I'm listening. I guess ...

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Hey, This is very deep and well thought out. I'm very glad you shared it. it seems like it means something to you. I feel like you wrote this about ...

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No one has a good answer as to why things happen, but this is a great expression of this. It may sound cliche, but nobody ever dies as long as ...

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This is the paragraph that triggered my attention to read your work."Ryann didn’t even notice the boy who was walking toward her as she dropped into her seat. It was ...

this is beautiful it is very well written it seems like that you have an understanding with the topic on a very deep level and you have narrowed all those ...

Ummmm well this is something. So here's my review for this piece of poetry. Orange bird-Mental Health -> Great touch. Although it has some features that are terrifying and reflect ...

Aww this is cute i love my mama too and i would do anything for her. So Here's my review for your poem. I think you did a great job ...

Ahh women and poems they are the perfect match. So here's my review of the poem. I think that this poem is great and if you say that this poem ...

Here's my review of your Poem This piece is great it progresses slowly and starts to build up with the a slow pace but it really moves you and makes ...