ArsheenAbdul

It was a short poem showing the facts of the day to day life of many people. It was composed well but, could have been better.

I found this poem very soothing and I really enjoyed reading it. Great work!

The entire story as a whole is something people witness in day to day lives or are even victims of it. I feel that the climax was the best part ...

This was very descriptive. I enjoyed it. The characters emotions were brought to life and I could see the entire scene playing in front of my eyes. Good one!

Hey! Now I'm not a professional writer and only a beginner so I don't really have all that much advice to give but, I found the ending of the poem ...

Thanks a lot for the very needed advice. As a beginner I needed opinion on my work and how to establish it further.

Thank you so much for your opinion. I have recently started writing and I did want reviews on my work. I will definitely take into consideration re-writing after the first ...