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Good Ma'am, I'm obviously no pro at poetry, but this is my opinion. I don't think this is bad. I think you have a misunderstanding here. You're word use leads ...

To my best friend [Shauni] . This is for you. Judge it as you want. Be harsh, don't be. Hate it, love it. I'm here because of her. I only ...

Good Ma'am (Ma'am I'm guessing), I disagree with those two. But that's just me I suppose. You're writing should be preserved in it's original state. You're the only one that ...

Good Sir, I've found myself reading poetry a lot. I'll have to make an attempt at it soon! But I apologize if this seems over analyzed or anything but I ...

Normally I would pick it apart but I like this. It seems really generic and it has this feel of sadness from the narrator even though he is supposedly happy ...

See I feel like it doesn't HAVE to be all "Teenage Angst" and honestly the only reason it screams that to me is because the rhyming scheme feels really elementary ...

Good Ma'am, I must say that you remind me of a girl that I am attached to. Might you be her in disguise? Actually in the relation I have to ...

My only advice is to change the line about the cash a bit; it doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the rhythm. I disagree with you here, I ...

Good Sir or Ma'am (I have not checked which one you are yet), When glanced over this I thought I would have to hammer you for some of your uses ...

Ello Good Sir or Ma'am, not quite sure which you are but I do like your name. I'm not quite 100% on what you were trying to do here but ...

You cannot tell me not to run; just because My shoelace is undone. Do You not remember that the time We rode our bikes together, it was My helmet You ...

Ello Good Sir or Ma'am, Ha if you are a girl then your name is 10 times cooler, just puttin that out there. But this is about that, so! I ...

A mask, when we smile for our parents I am only as real as you perceive me to be You cannot deceive me, for if you are trying… I have ...

Sorry this all looks like a jumbled mess~ Hey, I apologize if it is too late for you to be taking criticism on this but I'd like to say a ...

Ello Stori, I like this song. The way I picture it in my head its fast pace, kind of goes with the whole meaning of the song. The lack of ...