Areida

Well, I'm not going to be posting on this... you mean on the other part where I've got chapters one and two? I have no idea, honestly. I've got most ...

NOTE: The edited prologue is (finally) posted. Ha ha ha... Okay, I am absolutely going to rip this to shreads. And I am going to have fun doing it! Oooh... ...

Cheese!! I think somebody should create an anthology of poems that are all about cheese. :D

I agree that this does seem a little stale, but that seems intentional. This would make a really great start to a story... it seems quite vague, which leaves open ...

But that's why you love me. :mrgreen:

*blinks* *refreshes the page to make sure it's not lying to her* I think Snoink and Shriek just let me off easy. *celebratory dance* Actually, when I saw your names ...

Dangit. Once again I'm late and I have to be redundant... *sigh* Such is life. I liked the simplicity of it, and I agree about the "a-part" thing. It gave ...

No, I agree with ya. Is that any better? It seems a tad too emo to me, but I'm going to tweak it later anyway.

Okay, quick note: I have officially decided to change the spelling of Gavan's named back to "Gavin." That is all. Two Three Years Later I let out a sigh of ...

Sorry it took me so long to reply, Bamick. I really do appreciate all your comments. The fact that the Mom says, “I will always love you” is a little ...

Areida, I know exactly what you mean about Odysseus. I didn't like him at all. I thought his character was tricky and decietful. My favorite is Achilles. I think his ...

Ooooooh... *is impressed* Knowing the background for the idea on it makes it seem much more clever. Maybe if you could make that connection more evident or something... wow, that's ...

Wow, I'd really appreciate that. Thanks very much. :D

Firstly: Thank you for reading! Now to answer your question, she's supposed to be about twelve in this chapter, but I was reading through it this afternoon and realized she ...

Hooray!! I was worried you would be tsking me for cheesiness and/or triteness, but instead you actually liked it! I loved the 'let's go terrorize Flora, or something' line, made ...