Areida

Excellent... I too am going to have to agree with everyone else. Chilling really is the best word. Great job, Jack. Normally I post my favourite lines but I would ...

Good job as usual, Chevy. I liked the title- I'm horrible with them so anyone who can come up with a good title I definitely admire :D My favourite lines: ...

Great job... I really liked it. Your descriptions and imagery are marvelous. My favourite part: They tower over you, Floating amidst the ocean. Then there’s the sound of the waves ...

Jack- that was incredible. flashing lights redgreenblueyellow overwhelm the distant stars widen the pupils, extend the migrane, tingle the retina Clever... when it all falls down, flag at half-mast, s

There's nothing wrong with having a story set in the 50's... that actually gives me more reason to read it. I find historical fiction fascinating. My main problem with your ...

I agree with Jack... on the surface it seemed kind of trivial, and quite random, but it just gave me a feeling that there was something more lurking just below ...

Once upon a time there was a princess named Charlotte who was almost old enough to get married. The king really wanted her to marry because he knew he would ...

Marvelous. Simply marvelous. I only noted two spelling errors: Soon their was cursing Should be "there". I wrapped my arms gently around her waste, Should be "waist". Other than that, ...

You are plath by night and shoot razzles of beauty through your poetic cannon, held close enough to hear your heartbeat and the etchings of your fingers to be recorded ...

I'm going to have to third that notion. I really think this has some great potential to be a pretty cool short story. Heck, if you wanted to turn it ...

I agree. It's got a great idea, but needs some reworking to, as Liz said, "make it yours." Your rhyming flowed pretty well until here: the jewels of the sky ...

I can't make avatars, but I have a few cool ones if anyone wants them: I like them. :D And they might tide you over until Bobo and Emma make ...

I'm pretty sure they were. I liked it, personally. *shrugs* You just have to be able to distinguish fact from fiction. It's not the best book I've ever read but ...

I own a whole lot of them, but I've only actually read three or four...lol...I read Redwall and Salamandrostom this past summer and then I got sick of them. Redwall ...

I'm with Emma...I'll read it as soon as it is broken up. Personally I like to have a space between everything...it's not tiring on the eyes. :wink: After arriving in ...