Ardor

Don't change anything. Not a single thing. You are extremely talented in what you do. You write exquisitely and precisely and intelligently and you have an awesome way of expressing ...

Very good essay. You have evaluated your life in just a couple of paragraphs. I like how you kind of write in the 2nd person, yet it is obviously from ...

You, paperbackheart, have just made a prologue which makes me crave for more. I hope to see more of your novel. You are the best at what you do: creating ...

What? Is this the end? Sonofabitch! What a great read! How on Earth are you going to follow THAT one up? You have really really really impressed me- when I ...

Very inspirational, heartwarming and sensitive. I loved every line of it. Especially the very last line, where I feel you are addressing me personally. It's people like you which have ...

Oh yeah. This shit's on! Great way to start a great novel. You are one of the most talented writers on this site that not even my latest story has ...

Very good poem. You have a great way of describing specific elements and that works really well for your poem. However, on first glance readers may not be ready to ...

My one has to be The Naked Lunch by William Burroughs, It is so realistic, and so all over the place that it reads not as a story but as ...

YOU ROCK! YOU ROCK! YOU ARE AWESOME! I have on thing though. I think the fourth line is a little too long. It kind of makes sense to start a ...

Very...informal. Sorry if this seems mean, but I didn't like this poem. Sorry, but I think it needs improvements. First off, I am a huge fan of your work. Perhaps ...

Oh yes- this kicks the first chapter's ass! Very well done. You are a genius! Congratulations. You have just made my writing seem shit and pretensious in comparisant. You are ...

May I ask the purpose of the bracketted part? I found it kind of disrupted the flow of the story a little bit. You have a good use of words, ...

Good start. I like your everyday, very modern conversations you have added into it. Very realistic. However, for me it drags on a bit. I don't really feel there is ...

Great poem all round. It is full of imagination, symbolism and a very nice structure to it. May I ask how you personally get an idea or an inspiration for ...

Very good concept; the layout is great too. You have used a fairly simple idea to the best of your own abilities. However, for next time, some lines are a ...