ArctiWolf

Elegant writing, sometimes describing things can be even more effective than dialogue. Keep it up!

I read ALL the chapters and loved every single one. Keep it up! I really look forward to when you publish the next one. Happy writing!

Thanks for the review! It's late here so I'll try and do some editing on it tomorrow. Thanks again!

I thought about adding dialogue in the beginning but decided against it. This is more of a challenge for me to accurately portray characters with little to no dialogue. Thanks ...

Thank you for mentioning the fact that I missed describing the morning storm Walker predicted. I have done some serious editing (the one paragraph is now two separate paragraphs) so ...

Oh and the 'he' I think you are referring to actually refers to Greg.

Knowing the world around you helps you create realistic and likable stories. I happen to be somewhat of a scientific nerd and have a lot of facts stored in my ...

Oops, thanks for catching that. I still have a long ways to go! I plan to add some additional short stories into the chronology to introduce chracters slower. As always ...

Lol, I'm addicted to writing these things now. I went back and fixed up that paragraph a little bit so feel free to check it again. Adding their rescue ideas ...

Thanks so much! I really enjoyed writing it. (I like Sci-Fi quite a bit, but don't write about it often)

Thanks so much for the advice! If you liked this one you might like the sequel, I even gave him some new buddies! Click here if your interested >

The sequel is out so feel free to go check it out :

Great poem! (Rhyming poems are my favorite) Good moral too. I would review it but there really isn't anything to review. I look forward to seeing more from you. Until ...

It is also meant to be entertaining to an older audience as well. I find that limiting stories to a specific age group is a wasted oportunity.

I understand why you would think I should go into more gory detail about the wasps. However, only certain species are parasites.(most of them are) The red wasp is not ...