Archaeopteryx

Hi, I think this is quite a fun little poem. I think as far as rhyme and choice of vocabulary goes there's nothing that needs changing, it reads well and ...

Hi! I think the first couplet is quite strong, although there are a few issues in the rest of the poem that you may want to take a look at. ...

This is fantastic! The dialogue is light hearted and believable throughout, and just ridiculous enough to really appeal to my sense of humour (although I realise that's personal taste). Romeo's ...

Hi! There are parts of this poem that I think are very strong, but other areas that could probably use a few changes. Let's start with the positives. Firstly, the ...

I enjoy the simplicity of the triplets, and the rhythm they provide to tie the four longer lines of the poem together. However, I think that the third triplet needs ...