Aquareed

So the title drew me in- the blood part was very dramatic and the whistles bit was unusual, so got me interested. NITPICKS Line 2: smoked -should be smoke Line ...

Hi Maleficia! I will be reviewing this piece today! First Impressions My first impressions of this piece were that it was quite seems quite interesting and it's intruiging that people ...

That was the best thing I read all day. In a twisted sort of way. It completely scared me (I jumped when someone came in the room) and I thought ...

Wow. I really liked the way you can identify with the main character in this, she seems very....human. The only nitpicks I found were these: As the cars started to ...

Ok, I'm Aquareed, I'll be your reviewer today *rolls up sleeves* Nitpicks I instantly felt like a cold-blooded murderer. I thought about my dad in that instant Thjere are too ...

Ok, knitescu, I will be your first reviewer (yay!). Nitpicks The sun blazed down on me, and I smiled as I felt my body tingle with the heat. That's how ...

Wow. You may not have liked it but I did! I don't think I couldd find any nitpicks, but I'm not the best person to ask. But it was great, ...

Ok....Aquareed reviewing. Nitpicks It was a full moon, We were staring at each other, I didn't want to ruin this moment but I knew that this wasn't right. Ok, this ...

Hey Chuck13, I'm going to review your work today Part I: Grammar Mistakes are in bold:) The two boys climbed over a fence and took a short cut through a ...

Hey Auteur, this's Aqua and I'm going to review your work today. When I first started reading your piece of work, it grabbed me in right away. I thought the ...

Hey Legandaryrose, I'm Aqua and I'll be annoying you with a review today! :) First I wanted to say that I think this was actually pretty grabbed my attention really ...

XD. Ok, I'm not really *qualifyed* to reply to this, but I just randomly came across it. Obviously, you like big names! Don't expect any constructive criticism from me: I ...

I really liked this! I couldn't find any grammatic errors (which is a first) lol. I really like Bronwyn: she's awesome :) There is abviously something wrong with her, or ...

The thing I'm worried about, is it sounds like a sort of Eragon rip-off: the unconquerable Empire, the small, defant rebel group and the simple farm boy with a good ...

Oh. My. Gosh. You were scared to post this! It's amazing! I loved it! Few nit picks: jasmine, the ‘queen bee’ of my life. Why is her name never capitalised? ...