AquaMarine

thanks, i can't believe i missed them, especially the last one. i hate it when lines are a syllable out. Off to change them now. Thanks, Aqua X

Sorry, but could i possibly get a couple more reviews on this - kinda important. X

Right then, i'll give it a go . . .

i've read some twilight spoofs on here and most of them just switch the story round completely, but this felt a little bit more subtle, i loved it! made me ...

It's thanks in Telugu. in my attempt to become multicultural i'm learning thank you in as many different languages as possible and then writing them after reviews - then i ...

ehhh did anything else happen ? and who was with you ? and other spefic details would be nice.. don't know if this sounds stupid but it wasn't actually about ...

ah but then the whole focus of the poem would be the beach, and it's about the waves right? keep it as it is, it's good! Aqua X

Ok, wow, that was amazing. I usually just review poems but i am definatly coming back here if that is the standard! Totally unique outlook, i loved it so much! ...

ah fair point . . . but i think the title told me :) Aqua X

ah thanks, sorry it's bad but i just got back from holiday so i had to write something, i have been waiting for a bit of sun for a year! ...

yeah that didn't relate to me at all but i liked it, totally true of our generation. and funnily enough people have tagged hair on some of my facebook photos. ...

thanks for that, the punctuation mistakes were all accidental, as was the lack of a full stop, i will correct those in a sec. My idea of "faded denim" was ...

Thanks guys! I totally agree about the cliched ending. It was my first idea for the last stanza and when i read it over i thought exactly the same thing. ...

I love these books! i am so annoyed cause i haven't got round to reading inkdeath yet, is it as good as the other two? but i thought the movie ...

Thanks for the reviews! i was reading over it, i can't believe how much punctuation i left out. Oh well, hopefully i'll do better next time. Thank you for the ...