AquaMarine

No wait, I remember one, but I can't remember the authors name. The name of the book was Feather Boy, or something like that. I got that out for the ...

The Bartimaeus Trilogy - Jonathan Stroud Addition - Toni Jordan Past Mortem and High Society - Ben Elton The Black Magician Trilogy - Trudi Canavan The Harry Potters - J.K ...

Wow, i really, really liked this. It's one of those ideas that if written wrongly could turn into a cliched, boring poem. But i think you did it well, it ...

i love the idea of time as a vulture, great imagery! As you said in your description the poem is deep and meaningful. Although it was short, it said what ...

I'm not quite sure what this poem is about, i mean i understand what's happening but i dont know why and i don't know any of the feelings behind it. ...

Hey there! Ok, so, i really love this! It's cute, it flows fine, it rhymes (yay!) and it's not too cliched. I would think about splitting it into stanzas, but ...

this feels very bland to me. the rhymes are a bit basic - Friends - Ends, there - where. they didn't work for me. "Is very rare" (2nd stanza) would ...

Hi! Here goes . . . My best friend forever in my heart A bit of a cliched idea for me. but if you like it, keep it. will never ...

OK then, Right now I want to die. As Shina said, very cliched. not a great opening, it makes the poem just seem like any other. I believe I've said ...

Dark thoughts, hate and violence. i don't know but to me hate and violence are kind of cliched "dark" thoughts. maybe you wanted them there but im pretty sure there ...

Hey! I thought this was really good! I liked the unspoken metaphor in the first stanza - that people will follow other people through their life, doing the same things ...

Hi there, i really enjoyed reading this piece, it holds memories that i have too! So, Climbing over broken branch and unused stile, Feet tripping on the grass. Sun glaring ...

Loved it! those still frames.. can't hide shit.. your not happy... i can see it.. so at the start i thought it was rhyming 'cause of this, but it's less ...

i did really like the rhythm and rhyme in this, it flowed well and none of the rhymes felt forced. But i think one of the reasons they weren't forced ...

when i started to read this i loved the rhyme and rhythm, it was perfect! but this section didn't work so well. and rub your nose. I just want Your ...